Aditi this turned out really awesome!
You stared so amazingly strong. The way you captured the listen right from the start was perfect. And your voice got harder and more serious when you read the part about 'it could have been his grave' and that was sooo exact! Then you smoothed back to a gentler tone for the more emotional parts. It's incredible!
I love how you slowed down during the attack and really gave the lister time to visualize what was happening and then quickened your pace when the altercation actually occurred. It was just that way in my head when I wrote it! And hearing that come to life is so cool!
And the section when she's speaking to the Aurors. You conveyed just the right amount of anger when they doubted her, ahh! That entire scene... Amazing.
Ohh you're voice has gotten so much softer during the Fred part! It's exactly how it should be! You are doing such a wonderful job conveying all the emotions through your voice.
The kind of intensity you're able to put into this is making me feel so nervous... And I know what happens!
This entire Greyback scene... I can't tell you how amazed I am. I think you've done such an incredible job making it feel tense and fast but not reading it fast... You let all the words sink in but it still feels immediate.
This was really great, thank you so much for choosing Fairy Dust to podcast. :hug;
Sorry if this review didn't make much sense. Reviewing for a podcast was a lot different than for a typed story. Haha!
Edited by JChrissy, 13 February 2013 - 06:21 PM.